Film setting

Date: 13th Jul 2016 @ 8:02am

http://www.360cities.net/image/abandoned-orphanage-2

Investigate the setting for our frightful film trailer. What words and phrases can you use to describe it?

Don't forget to include a good metaphor to create the eeire atmosphere! The broken windows were blank eyes, staring down at the broken, battered ground. 

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Maimoona:) wrote:

i like the setting picture.

Batool wrote:

Thank you

Iqra wrote:

I like that raheem๐Ÿ˜Š

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Raheem wrote:

the old sinister orphanage shook me like a earthquake.

Imad wrote:

Creepy

Saya wrote:

Capital letters and full stops Raheem

Iqra wrote:

Really nice

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Iqra wrote:

The sun was going down on the old dilapidated orphanage as the wind whistled through the cracked window.The forest around it swayed in the wind you can feel an eerie ting down your spine

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Areebah & Saya wrote:

In my ears, there were howls of the abandoned horizon. In front of my eyes, there stood tall, immense trees with long, soaking branches. The branches will fall on you, when the time comes... The dilapidated house was a Devils hut. Dead leaves scattered all over the dusty ground. Would you dare to go in the house?

Saya & Areebah wrote:

Saya: I love my sentence!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ’œ

Areebah: Me too!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’–

Iqra wrote:

That is amazing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰

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Raheem aliyah wrote:

The trees covered the house like a blanket.(Raheem)
The old,dilapidated orphanage stood like a rock.(Aliyah)
My heart told stil as the dawn and my senses grew.(Raheem)
In front of my eyes I saw the most sinister creature to man kind.(Aliyah)
My unforgettable vision came to pass I saw the malevolent orphanage.(Raheem)
I the distantce I saw a malevalant alien standing in the orphanage.(Aliyah)
My blood boiled like a kettle once I saw the abandoned palace of mystery.(Raheem)
Hope you like it by Aliyah and Raheem.

Hasnain and batool wrote:

In the midell of now wear ther was a Sinatra hous which
had a craepy lady insid.

Ali wrote:

So cool๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜‹

Raheem Alyah wrote:

Hasnain and Batool
I work on your sentences lol๐Ÿ˜€

Azahan wrote:

๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜‹arsome

Iqra wrote:

Really good๐Ÿ˜Œ

Saya wrote:

Nose worke๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘

Saya wrote:

Nice job Raheem and Aliyah!๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’›โœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ali wrote:

Nices sentence Raheem

Raheem Alyah wrote:

Thanks guys๐Ÿ˜

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Shanzay and Ali wrote:

The gloomy abandoned wooden house stud in the misty woods.Infront of the trees,the crumbeled house was in destres.The cold,mysterious house had broken, dilaplaited windows.

Raheem Alyah wrote:

Nice sententences I like the adjectives ๐Ÿ˜€

Alok Nazam ๐Ÿ˜Ž wrote:

Nice work

Hasnain wrote:

So cool๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ฑ๐Ÿฝ

Saya wrote:

Nice sentences but you might want to check your spelling mistakes (e.g. Stud stood) ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’™

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Nazam and Alok wrote:

In the forest, a abandoned creepy, haunted orphanage stood in the middle of the immense, brown trees. The orphanage shook me like a earthquake. The wooden old house stood like a statue. Below the dusty ground was a dead body!In the distance,I saw an alien beside the orphanage.
Although the house is haunted ,would you go in side it? By Nazam and Alok

Raheem Alyah wrote:

This is epic ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Imad wrote:

Cool

Raheem Alyah wrote:

Very good๐Ÿ‘Œ

Farhan wrote:

Awesome๐Ÿ˜€

MAIMOONA :) wrote:

I like the adjectives and the vocabulary .

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Khadijah wrote:

This autumn,the darkness covered the dilapidated,grim, sinister orphanage like a blanket. Two young, abandoned girls hid in the mouldy, dusty attic as their bodies shivered with fear whilst something was approaching them... Suddenly, they heard floorboards creaking. Flooring boards creaking downstairs! Immediately, they knew someone or something uninvited was there! Who was it?

Raheem Aliyah wrote:

Wooooow this is not real๐Ÿ˜›

Iqra wrote:

Woooooooooow๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

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Iqra wrote:

The sun was going down on the old dilapidated orphanage as the wind whistled through the cracked window . The forest danced in the wind around the orphanage you can feel a tingle down your spine.You could see shadows like they were going to creep up on you!

wrote:

Nice

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wrote:

Outside the dilapidated orphanage with crooked,wooden stairs which were full of red stuff (blood!).On the floor,the sticks were lying exactly like a bed.My blood was fire!Ten miles away the explores boat was sparkling in the dark blue water.In the distance,the little farm hut was standing in the soft grass.The roof was like a big,broken mess.My body was shacking of the close death.On the house the cracked windows were as sinister as a death place.The colurs of the houses was faiding because of the dark wind.It started to shake...

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Asad Adeel wrote:

The haunted house was pitch black.All you could hear was an eerie sound as suspense was building up from no were.The abandand house had a old rusty creaky door what was open.Twiges wear scratching me.Beneath my feet,the twigs wear scratching me,but I was still brave.Crunchy ladies wear crunching Beneath my feet.I went in side, the pilers and walls wear dilapedated and distrioed. I saw some one...Who do you think is in the house.

Be aware......
๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ.

Saya and Areebah wrote:

Good work๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

Sajaad wrote:

I love the suspension going through.
To make it better is to put metaphors

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Farihah wrote:

Really good 4kwโ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Ali Haider๐Ÿ˜Ž wrote:

The dark red house had blood on the door with knives dug in.When I went close the immens tree was surrounding the old,creepy house. In front of me a piece fell off I saw something in the dilapidated,creepy house.Even though the immens trees were surrounding the house,I could finally see it. Part of the house was shining like stars in the air.

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Arij & Ariana wrote:

Dead grass and leaves danced as the wind howled over the moon.
Above the dusty leaves I crept onto something big , even though it was really dark : could picture two bright red eyes!
After looking at those eyes I felt like being watched .
After a while a crash came from inside the spooky dilapidated house but I didn't want to step one foot closer to the hunted house!
I looked behind me and saw a scary women with grey curly hair "come here!" she whispered .

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wrote:

I didn't feel ok . I stared at the at the orphanage like I was dreaming.The wind flew through the orphanage as if was never there.The trees were immense giants. It was dark as the night.The abandoned orphanage was living in dead.There was an eerie sound of suspence coming from no where. As midnight struck every thing was silent. The light turned off. I felt like I was being watched. I backed away silently...Although I was scared, I stepped into the house.

Ayesha wrote:

cool

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Azhan - 4KW โœŒ wrote:

In the terrifying old house there was a horrific sound. It or him or she had a knife.
! BUT WHAT IS THE THING ? "Well I'll give you a clue I'm like a person in the dark,
my name is UNKNOWN ? But did you know that I always hold Something"The killer said.
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wrote:

By Imad and Amealia๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ‘

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Farihah wrote:

The. House. is. Very. good. The. House. It. Was. Sceery.

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